Your Essay Needs Narrative

Your Essay Needs Narrative

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Adult learners of English for international are dis served by school based group classes my position is that I agree and my first point was because there are too many different ages and goals in the classroom the teacher cannot meet the individual needs of students now I need a specific example a narrative a story with details to illustrate that point to show what I mean for example Tatiana a distinguished 50-something Russian professional and mother takes offense at having to sit in the same with 19-year olds who sleep tweet and have to be reminded to get off their phones she doesn’t need to learn how to write essays she needs to write email messages and create PowerPoint presentations so that example has a lot of specific details in it it focuses on one person and so now you can better understand my point about too much variety in the classroom my second supporting point was that language learning is about speaking and students in classes of 15 to 20 people have little to no time to speak. Learn how to integrate narrative in your essay on Edusson.

So I need a narrative I need a story to show what I mean by that for example after completing all seven levels of the University of Houston downtown’s English Language Institute where she was personally insulted by teachers Daniella a twenty-something Colombian woman still couldn’t speak English fluently made basic mistakes such as not putting s on the ends of verbs in the third-person singular and had to spend more money to hire a private tutor to practice speaking English again a specific narrative a story focusing on one person with a lot of specific details that illustrates how difficult it is to improve your speaking in a school my third supporting point was the counter-argument and the refutation together again the counter-argument is the opinion of the person who disagrees with me and that counter-argument is that school based group classes can offer adult language learners opportunities for socialization I disagree with the counter-argument in my refutation where I returned to my position and I say that society offers many other opportunities for socialization.

Without the negative characteristics of school based group classes so what do I mean by that I need a specific example I need a narrative or a story that will illustrate what I’m trying to say for example kata a twenty-something German woman whose company BASF transferred her to Houston took dance classes at strictly street salsa where she made a lot of friends and an empowering and not infantilizing experience so the example of kata shows how internationals can find other ways to socialize besides going to language school specific examples do not necessarily have to be true the person who reads your essay won’t know if your stories are true or not so as you get into the habit of brainstorming specific examples you can get creative and imaginative and invent them another way to prepare specific examples is to brainstorm them in advance for that purpose I have created a chart I give examples and then I give you room to brainstorm your own examples.